Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 14/16
Comments: I’ll start off by saying how much I adore your paneling (that sprint with Princess getting closer was amazing) and expressions are always top notch. There’s so much life in your work, I can’t get enough. I really like how you involved Princess’s back story as well and made the plot of the characters feel so real and involved. I also like how you did the “…Lady…” with eraser to make it seem like a muffled noise.
The ending was??? so sad??? I really got myself magnetized to it and really felt for both characters. It hits the same statement I made with Honey’s comic where I felt like these two could really be friends outside of this situation. I wasn’t expecting it and you got me to feel SO much.
The pink was a little hard to read but honestly pink is a hard colour to work with! I still love that you use colour where you can while also not putting too much on yourself to finish these.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 23/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 17/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 15/16
So where to begin. I actually began tearing up when you and honey were talking about your purposes and vooky saying they are just to make someone happy that really hit me and I got a little misty. I love your expressions and your panelling and all of that! I am living for vooky bazookie which is dumb and toony and I love it.
I appreciate that this is a OCT perceived purely by combat but you showed that it doesnt take fighting to best your opponent in this case using princess’ need to do something good and having that be their down fall was great. So its like even tho vooky “won” they lost you know. I appreciate that.
As for where you got hit. Please give me more contrast. It is hard to read in parts and just having contrast would definitely fix that! But you are constantly creating in the spirit of the contest. Thanks for giving us something sweet between two absolute sweet hearts.
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