Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 24/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 12/16
Comments: I really, really loved the story of this entry! Really different and I loved the plot point of the fact that Chroma has been waiting to participate for a while now. Vooky always has such creative fighting styles that it always gives me a good chuckle. I also enjoyed that you used different colours, again a huge plus for me with you using traditional work! It really helps decipher the characters and prevents it from possibly blending too much!
I didn’t understand that Vooky changed sizes when they did “goblin mode” so seeing how small they were suddenly threw me off! Maybe you could’ve shown a way to emphasize the shrinking, then I would’ve been able to understand a bit better!
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 20/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 15/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 13/16
Your enteries are always so fun! I appreciate the fanfiction segment and that you have brought both the time horaxel has been waiting and like that they are time based so it really rounds it out! I appreciate the different colors because it helps things read!
You really showed you knew both characters well with horexel being flirty and vooky not appreciating it. I agree with chib I wish there was a clearer sequence for goblin mode but I appreciate how you took the critique from last round and made your panels bigger and gave your comic more room to breath.