Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 20/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 24/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 14/16
Your style is one of my favourites. I loved all the expressions, the paneling, and the amount of energy and life this comic gives me. I had a really good laugh! I think only having the use of traditional media makes it a bit more challenging and the fact that you added what colours you could to match Vooky AND Aoba is why I gave you full scores in effort. Aoba’s character was a bit all over the place look wise which is why I deducted points in consistency.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 21/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 20/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 18/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 15/16
I absolutely adore the size comparison of Aoba and Vooky and the way you showed it in some of your panels warms my heart. The flirty nature of vooky and her info dumping gave me a good giggle when vooky opened her mouth to show the boa constructor.
My only critique would be all though your paneling is super creative, it gets a little hard to read, so I would’ve given more points if this was seperated into more pages for clarity. But for this being a week this is super impressive and really embodies my original idea of what I wanted the OCT to be.
You are really grinding considering this is traditional media and I respect that!