





Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 21/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 18/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
The jojo frame made me laugh so hard! You have such an insane understanding of form and posing, I really loved seeing more of that in this comic which is why consistency is full score. Also a beginning and end! The creativity is a bit lower than the others only because I wasn’t expecting a ‘fight’ in the lovers round, but you brought it back with that really touching ending.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 20/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 20/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 18/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 14/16
I loved the flow of this comic and I especially love the lil details you added that protected you from being meta. The stand out one is that you the artist knew about fushis BF but you let fushi give viktor that information.
I took off points on consistency because I believe the jump from page 4 to page 5 was way to drastic and it pulled me out and I asked myself the question. WAIT?! How did we get here?
The meme I love it, it really made me smile! The posing in this scrumptious