Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
I adore how you did the electricity attack! Wow, it was beautiful! The “he brought healing” was hilarious! You drew Ronin so cute! This comic is also a huge example of whenever I talk about “creative paneling” where you don’t put every action into a small box. You’re unique with your panels and even have the action poking out of it sometimes! It makes it very exciting to read.
I also enjoyed that you don’t make your character OP. You show them being beat up and almost having a hard time fighting your opponent. Like Skitterien dripping near the end? wow!
I really enjoyed this comic.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 23/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 20/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
I am wildin about this comic, there is so many dynamic poses! You really captured the personality of Ronin, and you made him some one genuinely intimidating its like a boy scout but he got his ass kicking badge!
I love the shading you did and I deeply appreciate the critique I had in the last round is taken. I said your shading is muddy clean it up or dont have it and you said “Say no more. RITO”
I knocked points on creativity because, this is a really creative comic, I wish there was more of an internal workings of how skitterian is adapting. A case of you told us they adapted, but how? Like they were getting the brakes beat off them and then the electricity no longer affects them? buh how???
Still can’t get over how you some how made jorts and a fanny pack intimidating .