Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 15/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 10/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 10/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
Comments:
Very clean lines, easy to read for the most part, and the posing was very creative. I think the addition of the speech bubbles would’ve helped a lot in this case as we’re left to guess what’s going on and how the characters feeling. The only part I really got confused with was the “shark fin” but I’m sure with speech we would’ve known what that attack was.
Time management for these things is hard to predict, but with almost a month to submit this entry it’s why I hit you so hard with the effort score. There were other entries in previous battles that did more with less time so unfortunately this just fell really short for me.
If you ever run out of time next time, maybe even a sketch of the speech bubbles (or just submitting a sketch in general) would be the best way to go so everything you’d want us to see will be there!
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 12/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 12/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 10/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
You will stay consistent through and through and that is something I appreciate. I think this comic needed dialogue before line work. I have no idea whats going on in some of the panels and because of the thickness of the lines it is hard to parse the smaller panels.
With no speech bubbles we dont get a feel of the characters and that is something very important to me. Do you capture the essence of your opponent and I don’t feel like you did with out the written aid. I always believe show dont tell. But sometimes if the shown aint doin it the tellin definitely helps
This was also one of those things where more pages hurt you. You ran out of time and you didn’t deliver on the amount of work you signed yourself up for.