Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
Comments: You are so good at expressions and the meme references sprinkled in were very appreciated lmfao. I LOVED that fushi randomly got human limbs, that got a huge laugh out of me, and that you incorporated his other battles in this comic! It really showed the care and attention you’ve put into this OCT and it gave you big points from me!
I loved the grayscale you put in this as well. Different shades to emphasize what you wanted us to see, adding gradients in the appropriate places, it really helped break things up and making it easy to read.
The cheese ending (when feeding fushi the cheese) I wasn’t sure what direction to read it in, as we were reading it from left to right at the start, and that felt right to left! If the “Oh yah” sequence was on the left then it would’ve kept the flow !
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 16/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 15/16
This comic got so many laughs outta me. This felt very on brand for both characters princess being super confused half the time and fushi being an absolute shit lord. When you said you wanted to fight fushi I was nervous because fushi’s writing team and blueeys art are such strong competitors but if anyone can take them on I feel it is you! You incorporating the last rounds lore really mean’t a lot especially since you waited so long to participate.
I agree with chib I feel the last bit of paneling was really confusing but after another read I understood better.