Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 18/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
Comments: I’m always excited to see your work. Skitterien popping out of Kanna’s chest? Perfect. I also loved how you implemented Skitterien’s abilities and the flow of your comics are always so good. It’s like eye candy to me! Kanna’s mental state towards the fighting is also really interesting to me as I find that a really nice piece to the entire story.
The hammer ending was really funny, though there was a part of me that was hoping to see more of Skitterien’s abilities played within the story.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 21/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
I absolutely love the continuation of the comic from the other people and how exactly you are gearing up for whats going to happen! You have such a strong grasp of comic flow you create such dynamic panels! The mantis shrimp being used here was so clever!
I think how you showed skitterians ability was really sick! It did take me out just a little bit but I didnt deduct any points from that.
My only critique is skitterian being their own downfall with the hammer is why I took points off. It felt like it was a little pinch in the writting but that is my only critique everything else is candy!