Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 22/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 12/16
Comments: I can’t believe that you coloured and edited this all on your phone. It gives you huge effort points for me, cause I would’ve never expected it. It looks like digital art from a tablet! I adore all the hatching and that certain panels have colouring and effects behind it to emphasize the appropriate feel.
Your posing and anatomy are fantastic. The fighting poses are beautiful and really depicts the action well. There was such a nice back and forth between the characters where they both didn’t feel OP! Everything had a really nice flow and I wasn’t confused reading through! You even incorporated Fushi’s colours into this with the headband!
I love that your character’s own story is so nicely intertwined with this OCT. Beautiful entry.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 24/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 22/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 20/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 16/16
This is one of the highest scoring entries in the entire tourny. You did such a beautiful job with everything. I can fill this entire page with everything I love about this comic! It’s colored, it has hatching, the rendering is so well thought out.
This is a comic brought so much to the table for me. It had a really nice flow. Nothing was confusing, you had a transformation sequence that told me EXACTLY what is going to happen. Also you have an over arching story of your original characters! You have so many story threads and something I appreciate is your character hasn’t said anything meta yet. Which isn’t a knock on any one else but it is something I deeply appreciate.
The little details, really shows me you have been really paying attention to everyone’s comic and I really only have one critique and its I don’t feel like hinata would throw themselves onto your crab claw. Which is why you didn’t get a complete perfect score from me.