Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 18/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 20/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 15/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 10/16
The story is very creative and I like the twist of the “live action” at the end and how Vooky was defeated. However, I don’t think the personality of Vooky was captured too well (based off of the other comics we’ve seen them in) and I got a little lost in the action where I wasn’t sure what was happening. I think if the paneling was just slightly bigger, maybe even make it’s own page to show the action shots more instead of trying to fit them in small spaces, it would’ve been a lot easier to read! Also maybe if Horaxel’s magic was in a different colour that would’ve also helped me be able to understand what was going on!
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 20/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 21/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 15/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 10/16
I absolutely love how you defeated a cartoon it really took me by surprise and the leem that you drew captured my entire heart. I had to deduct points for consistency because some panels had clean lines others had sketch lines. Keep it consistently one line style and I don’t think I would’ve deducted as much. There was some confusing panels but I chalk that up to this being your first comic and comics are dang hard man. But, all in all I think this is a creative entry!