Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 20/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 16/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 18/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 14/16
Comments:
The action was really cool and I loved the panel with the bullets going out of the panels and giving it that 3D look? Super cool! You were really creative with your back and forth of the characters and I enjoyed their fight a lot! I also enjoyed that you added colour sparingly but in the more important places to define the characters and action.
The ending threw me off a bit as it felt a little like a cop out. I didn’t understand why Kanna would think that’s a trick or why Hinata would say that to her? It just didn’t click with me and left me feeling a little lost!