Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 20/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 15/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 15/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 14/16
Comments: Your art and comics are always very funny and enjoyable to read, however I felt like there was a lack of back and forth between Princess and Fushi. Princess personality, to me, wasn’t really captured in this comic outside of big werewolf shoots gun. I felt like the writing didn’t give Princess a chance to show her powers (or her airheaded-ness as a pomeranian) and she was defeated in such an easy way.
I also got confused with the “taco bell” power and didn’t understand why Fushi got a bigger tail that made him “a rat king.” I was hoping that because Fushi is allergic to cheese that it would’ve hit the wheel on a BAD reaction and Fushi would’ve still fought princess in a unique way compared to just being squished by a hoard of rats. That joke fell flat for me unfortunately, especially since Fushi should’ve been the only rat in this void, and so the rest of the ending just didn’t hit. It made it feel like this was more of a “fushi only comic” rather than a fighting OCT.
I really really loved the entry in the lovers bracket that you guys did and was really hoping to see that same back and forth in this entry.
Originality: how original is your character/comic. - 15/24 Creativity: how creative were you in beating your opponent. - 15/24 Effort: Effort =/= skill. How much effort did you put into this. - 18/20 Consistency: are you staying consistent in your style?- 15/16
Ah what to say. I always love reading Fushi’s entries they are always so strong and funny and creative. Where how you won lovers really showed me you guys were going to keep that back and forth going.
But, there didn’t really feel like a back and forth with princess. There was the cheeky joke that sent princess into werewolf but after that we didn’t really have anything. I can forgive the rat tacobell I don’t agree with it but I can forgive it, what is harder for me was the mass of rats outta no where. When you got the huge tail I was gearing up for some like epic fat tail jutsu none-sense but what I got left me sad and feeling a bit of a cop out. Which is why originality and creativity took a hit because yea its is a creative premis but it discarded too much of the theme / already established lore so it felt more like when you were a kid playing pretend with the kid who says whatever they can to win the make believe.
I love your guy’s work I love the writing and art, but this one felt some how rushed?